Wednesday 13 April 2016

The Unimportant safe by Mathew

The Unimportant safe
I’ve just received a special safe that came from the government. It went through London and a lot more to get to Birmingham. On it, it says ‘to Sam Jackson from the government’. He asked me to crack it open, but the problem is, I don’t  know what the password is.

I’ve been up all night trying to crack it but there’s now another problem, the government wants it back in three days! So, on the internet I searched up most common passwords. All it came up with was 1234 and 12345, I tried that. It didn’t work, I knew it wouldn’t work. My brother called and when I picked up the phone he straight away said 1738, then he hung up.

I wondered what that could mean, I called him again, but he didn’t answer. I got an idea, the password. That
could be the it. So I tried it. It worked. I sent it back to the government, but it was nothing important. ‘Yeah next time it will be important, I hope.’

The end

By Mathew

12 comments:

  1. awesome i really liked how you included the government in your story!

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    1. Thanks Cameron, maybe you could write a story like this?

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  2. What a cool story and inclusion of government, safe & cracking the password makes it look so realistic in today's digital world!

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  3. Matthew, I liked your story but next time include a bit more adjectives to make your story more meaty. Otherwise it was awesome.

    Ethan.H and Kenny.W

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  4. That's super duper good Mathew. I really liked how you had humor in it: 1738! Its really funny and I LOLed so hard!

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  5. I liked how you included other people in your story and I also liked how you weaved some humour into your writing to make it more interesting.
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    Bree & Rebecca

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  6. I liked how you included other people in your story and I also liked how you weaved some humour into your writing to make it more interesting.
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    Bree & Rebecca

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  7. I like how you add lots of detail to your story and how you included other people as it might of gotten boring but yet it didn't

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  8. Great job Mathew Me'a and I loved the way you included the government idea as well as 1738. Your story was very funny we thought it was wonderful. Maybe you should write a second version?

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  9. Matthew, this was a good story, but like Ethan and Kenny, I think it could have been more descriptive with more adjectives.I would like to know, what was in the safe, and if you are going to tell the class and the other readers, will it be with with a sequel, and why am I asking so many questions? Lastly I enjoyed how it was the government as the main aspect of the origin of the safe but again a question who was Sam Jackson, and was he part of the government, and what country's government was it? please respond
    Blake

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  10. AWESOME Mathew, I like how your brother said 1738

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  11. I like this story Mathew as you did a great job writing it from just one little picture. Did you do some research when writing this story to find out common passwords? Also, how did the main character know that the common passwords wouldn't work?

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