Autumn Haiku 
Leaves gliding down trees
Wind whistling through my hair
Summer is gone now
By Gabrielle M Sayer
Kids playing in leaves
Different colors of the leaves
Golden brown, orange
By Cameron
Welcome to Room 3's blog for 2016. We are a class of energetic year 5 and 6 learners and our teacher is Miss J.
Wow Gabrielle and Cameron that was really good I loved how you guys used adjectives like golden,brown and orange that really created a picture in my mind. Are you going to do any more haiku's
ReplyDeleteI really liked your Autumn Haiku Gabby and Cameron. I liked how both of you used a lot of adjectives, it made me think that I was really there. And Autumn is my favourite season.
ReplyDeleteThanks! We made a lot of other poems of all the seasons in the year. Go check them out I hope you will like them!
ReplyDeleteCameron B.
I really liked how you guys described the "Autumn Haiku" because you used lots of adjectives to make it sound realistic. I also liked how you did the success criteria, 5 sylables on the top and bottom line, 7 sylables on the middle line. Good job!
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