Tuesday 25 October 2016

A narrative called The Magic Wand

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The Magic Wand - By Gabrielle

A long, long time ago there were some minions ordering fries and burgers for them and their boss at McDonald's. They ordered three large double cheese burgers, three large double chicken burgers and six large fries.

But there was a problem. Mrs Daniel had forgotten the password for the safe. So the minion’s ran out to find things to brake the safe open. Minion one finds a big branch. So minion one, minion four and minion five rammed it at the safe. They got hurt so they sat down and it didn’t open. Minion two finds a bomb, he lit it and put it in front of the safe. He didn’t run away and it exploded. He got hurt so he sat down, but it didn’t open. Minion three finds a car and he hot wired it nd rammed it into the safe. It didn’t open and he got hurt so he sat down.

Mrs Daniel gets worried that she won’t be able to open the safe. Then Mrs Daniel finds a wand up in a tree. Minion three climbed up the tree and grabbed the wand. She said “abra cadabra, open the safe.” It opens. Now everyone can eat their fries and burgers.

5 comments:

  1. WOW. What a great story Gabby,we loved it! Was it hard to come up with all those ideas?
    By Tait and Auralie.

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  2. Tait it's mine not Gabby's,I didn't put my name on it so miss J accident put Gabby instead of mine.

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  3. Wow! that is a phenomenal story because they try to open the safe but it doesn't open. How did you come up with the idea of magic McDonalds.

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  4. Tait it's mine not Gabby's,I didn't put my name on it so miss J accident put Gabby instead of mine.

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  5. Wow that made me laugh because the minions keeped on hurting themselves.
    How long did it take to write this?

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