Monday 12 September 2016

AA BB poem by Mathew


This is a rhyming poem down with AABB, meaning the first two lines rhyme and the second two rhyme. Enjoy.

I dropped my pickle

I dropped my pickle,
On a really big prickle.
I couldn't pick it up,
So I called a grownup.

But he was in pain,
So I shouted for Jane.
But she was stuck in traffic,
By the way she's very photographic.

So I went next door,
But they were on tour.
No one was there,
Apart from a bear.

I hopped in the car
And I drove very far.
I stopped at a home,
It was actually a dome.

I knocked on the door,
Maybe they went to war.
No one came,
I guess everything's the same.

3 comments:

  1. Good job Mathew your poem was really funny and it uses the AABB pattern efficiently.

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  2. Amazing work Mathew. Your poem used the AABB rule very nicely and I like how you used pickles in your poem.

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  3. Well done Mathew, I like how you fitted so much rhyming words in the poem.

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